Souma Act 1 VCV Concept Art

I don't know if it's necessarily concept art but This is the outfit I'm thinking of using for Shigeru Souma's Act 1 VCV bank (I'm working on it, not very far yet DX) I guess I'll know more for sure once I actually finish the bank whether this fits it. I drew a lot of sketches (by a lot I mean like five different outfit ideas X.x) and I took pieces I liked off of each one and this is what I got XD I'm starting to think it looks too similar to his act one, that maybe it looks over-thought... I don't know XD I at least wanted it to match his act 1 CV design. I haven't decided on colors yet.

I also apologize to those who can read Japanese about my crappy characters. I don't know how you're supposed to write them but I wanted to write Souma's name on there DX